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Re: The Moon's Love Poem
Your really good XD third poem I read of yours and I really like it. The only thing that jumped out to me while reading was this part: Doomed, star ...
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Re: My Hope
One human is born, Many others killed. One creature loved, Others destroyed. Take some, give some, But nothing stays the same. Yet I cry for more is taken, Less is ...
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Re: I Do Not Like You, Dani D.
This is really good :) Good vent. Poetry is an amazing thing when it comes to venting. This is great :) Pure emotions.
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Re: Words Understanding Everything
Its the signature :)
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Re: Bird
I like this because I know this = your emotions. That's what poetry is all about! Emotion. I agree with the other comments. Fix the highlighted things. I really like ...
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Re: Words Understanding Everything
Words Understanding Everything Day 234 The dirt and mud have taken quite a toll on my breathing. It’s hard to breath under these conditions anyways. Today I saw death straight ...
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Re: Forgotten
I really liked this. Its obviously a poem about friendship, but a poem where you puked all the negative emotion into the literature, and I applaud you for that. Better ...
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Re: Prairie Winter
Hey! I really like this poem! If I'm not mistaking, this poem is about a change in the seasons? Anyhow, I like the fact that you use a good amount ...
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Re: Teardrops in the Rain
I really like this song :) Do you have any kind of music written to it? When I read this I really observed rhythm in your words and thats really ...
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Re: Hello Everybody :)
My name is Miguel. I hope we can share our works and review each other's works :D I am really looking forward to posting some good things :)
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Re: Four Walls... Four Walls...
I sit, the middle being my friend. Four walls, four walls, and they speak, saying I’m trapped saying I wont breath. Their eyes! They grow, they pierce, they read my ...
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