Miffles

Chapter One They all named themselves awful names, fake little names that no responsible parent would ever be able to name their children. There was a Dolce and a Legato ...

^^ Thank you very much, glad you liked it. And, yeah, this is all part of a larger story. Thank you for the corrections, I'll be sure to edit. Edits ...

Chapter 3: Everything You Want Me to Be There were voices in the kitchen. I opened my eyes, only slightly, and tried looking through the now fogged up lenses of ...

Chapter 2 “You really don’t mind me staying here for a while?” Jenna asked for the millionth time since Mom told her she could stay in the guest bedroom until ...

Chapter 3: Conspiracy Theory “By the way,” Jesse started, looking up at the slowly passing New York skyscrapers as they walked down the crowded sidewalks, “why do you keep calling ...

Nice work - it's well written, the characters make sense, and it's got the right level of description in it. Just a couple of typos: “No, I don’t think so. ...

Chapter 2: Backup “Listen guys,” Catherine said, standing straight legged on top of the cement bench with her arms crossed over her chest, “we have a crisis. Thank you, Jesse, ...

Chapter 1: Leon No one looked around when the sound of hurried, nervous running filled the hallways. A teacher barely looked up from their computer before seeing the light blonde ...

Symbolic. I loved it.

Very pretty. I'm in a band, so I can understand how a strong bass can "roar".