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Re: InBetween(Part Two)
"Don't cry Jene. Don't be upset. Listen to me!" "She can't hear you Seth." Said the voice of a woman unseen, that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere. "Who ...
Jan 14, 2008 -
Re: The Chain that Devides: A Death Note Fanfiction
I really liked this piece of writing. It followed the story very well and really made Light seem more human. The only suggestion I have is when you describe Lights ...
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: In Between(Part one)
"I still can't believe he's really gone. He's always been here, with me. I'm almost mad at him for leaving, even though he couldn't help it." Jene Samson wrote in ...
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Daydreams before dawn
Sorry, posted twice.
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Daydreams before dawn
This is a good idea for the start of a story. The only syggestion I have is to be more clear about what character is speaking. The entire part with ...
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Daydreams before dawn
This is a good idea for the start of a story. The only syggestion I have is to be more clear about what character is speaking. The entire part with ...
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Olivia
That was truely an amazing story. I liked the way you put the detail of wanting to shake hands with the character at the begining. I was a seemingly an ...
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Olivia
That was truely an amazing story. I liked the way you put the detail of wanting to shake hands with the character at the begining. I was a seemingly an ...
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: I'm new(like everyone else on this forum
Hi. I'm new, as I said before. My name is Mariska. And of coure like everyone else on this site I LOVE to write. I am a pretty good writer ...
Jan 11, 2008