MidnightWriter

Haha, grammar nazi. Thanks! Silly mistakes I made... I'll fix them soon. I'll probably post more later!

This book is my favorite. At first, I didn't want to read it because it was by Stephenie Meyer. I have to say if you think she was an OK ...

I warily stepped one foot out of the window, glancing back into my dull bedroom for a moment. One small slip up, one noise, and I’d be screwed. Turning back ...

Hey there! So, I'm going to be honest with you. I thought it was good, but very long. You added so much description, which is good. I like how you ...

So many questions floating in my head. I’m so confused, but your not actually helping me are you? No, you aren’t. You’re just making me more confused. So , let ...

She woke up; she didn’t know where she was, or who she was for that matter. All she knew was her skin burned all over. She looked down at her ...

Thank you! I was trying to work in the descriptions of the four, before. I will take your questions in consideration and try to answer them in the story. Thank ...

Thanks everyone; and no Bella. I wouldn't even have guessed you were new. Sorry, for getting you mad?

Thank you. I see what you mean about the advanced thing. I edited it, thanks again!

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I only found a few mistakes, other than that I loved it. If you'd like, I'll post a full review later. I'm definitely coming back to read more. I LOVED ...

Hey! I'm Mackenzie. I'm 13 years old, and I've loved to write since I could read (literally.) I've been looking for a good writing site like this for ever, so ...

It's an OK story. When I started reading it, I saw you said 'Zephyr said, zephyr did this'. That gets really ANNOYING. I would suggest saying 'I,' or 'She'. Good ...