Midnight

Yeah that's ok. It's meant to be confusing, it was sorta my bedframe of being in Revision mood at the time of writing and can also be used to explain ...

yeah I think it's an odd expression in England aswell!

Hey yeah it meant mind. It was kinda meant to be that thing of when you're revising or working your mind kinda drifts away and you try to get back ...

Lovely. Beauty captured in writing, there were some discrepencys with rhythm but didn't care. Oh to be in in love like this would be wonderful, that's how this made me ...

I could really excited by the first stanza which I thought was pretty interesting and quick, but I dunno the poem felt like there could be more too it and ...

oh this was gorgeous, great imagery, I gotta run but I'll come back later and give this something more constructive!