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Holy crap! That chapter is really long! :O It's like amazingly freakishly long! Pahahaha but this time I didn't feel like jumping ship, so it was okay ;) I was ...

The White Swan, fearing that it would bleed and turn into a Black Swan, hovered over her and said, “Oh, please don’t shoot, lady! I shall do whatever you ask.” ...

Oh gosh. This chapter was entirely about horrible things! I hate that land lady matron person. Couldn't she tell that he was sick and dying?! Is she really that thick?! ...

Oh gosh, Snoink. You have absolutely no trouble with disturbing stuff, do ya? Hahaha man. Reading about that tailor was extremely awkward. Every single time you mentioned something about "measuring" ...

Dawww this is really sad!! :( I almost cried and I felt so bad! I loved the jail scene when Granid saw Solea for the first time. Even though you ...

Oi. This one has a lot of reviews so there's a chance that every thing I say is redundant and unnecessary, but oh well! :) There's one thing that kind ...

WOO I'm back! :3 Waaaaa I knew it! I knew it, I knew it, I knew it!! I was acting like I was watching a horror movie! "Don't go in ...

Waaaa! So long. This one DID take a half an hour to read! It did, it did! Holy crappers.... I really liked this though >.< it was vurry good! I ...

Okay. So first, I almost died! XO this chapter was so long it might have taken me a half an hour! Though I wasn't paying attention to the time so ...

Having awoken early in the morning before the intended time, This sentence seems awkward. Try rephrasing it. Ryiiko, the thief, it seems like too much when you put "the thief" ...

I like this. It's well written and I think you described everything very well. The town itself was crowded a brown. Here, I think you meant "in brown" but even ...

Uhm.... I don't get it >.< I got really confused in the first paragraph because you didn't really explain the two people and at first, I just though that you ...

Though I very very much enjoyed Crosse and Lavira, I don't think I can say the same for Vanessa. To me, she seems a little too perfect, and it's a ...

Oh wow I certainly love this. It was definitely enticing and I couldn't peal my eyes away for anything! It was exciting and made me curious, which is exactly what ...

Oh dear Addy kins! (And BTW, it took me three tries to write "dear" XO) I absolutely HATE this story! (JK I'm just jealous of your talent) I think it's ...