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Heyyyy girliee :) Is this the piece you were talking about?? If not, I'm reviewing anyway ;] I liked this short story you got here. I think it's really well ...

Hellooooooooooooooo there. I agree with xXmusicaXx for the most part, with the maturity of it and the fact that there are a lot of teeny tiny members of YWS. But ...

Oh gosh... there are just no words.... I truly LOVED this to pieces! And now I'm scared to enter this contest O_o hahaha Sooo I really only have one nitpick, ...

Okay, first, I really really liked this. It's different and exciting. Even though we barely know the characters, I still like them, and feel bad for them. Now, with that ...

Okay... it's definitely an interesting idea, you have here, I must say. I feel kind of bad for saying this, but if it wasn't review day, I probably wouldn't have ...

Grr, I have a feeling that this chapter will have less corrections than the other chapters :/ I mean, that's really good for you, but I gotsts a failing review ...

So the dad either up and left, or died! .... My money's on died, buuuuut I wont know until I read about it XP .... anyway! When Dexter awoke the ...

Well hey there! I shall review, and it SHALL be worth while! So... erm.... be prepared? Meh, I don't know, I'll just stop babbling now. "Yet another victim of the ...

Ooooooooooooooohhhh I see what you did there ;P I got this chapter confused with chapter 16 XP wooooopsies! So anyway, I shall begin my review now! Aaaaand.... ACTION! O_o The ...

First things first, I loved this! Haha I loved the whole horror thing, you don't really get much of that here on dear old YWS, for some reason (or I ...

I know you wrote this when you were seven and all, but you could have at least edited it before posting it. It kind of gave me a headache with ...

Buu.... I'm getting sad! Hahaha I mean, suddenly everyone is not how we thought they were. I still don't want to believe that Granid killed that girl, though. That time ...

ZOH MY GOD! D: What?! Noo! Oh dear.... Well for one thing, this was amazing for how short it was. When I saw it, at first I was hesitant to ...

I liked it a lot. From the title I thought it was going to be extremely depressing, but it really wasn't XD it was quite amusing, actually. I loved the ...

Ahhh you know, I really suck at reviewing poems, so I actually probably won't say anything helpful, I'll just compliment! :D Even though I'm good at math (98 in Algebra!) ...