MichieOh

I really like your poem because its really short just one stanza, four lines...when people write about love or almost any poem about romance they tend to write dozens of ...

This is really nice, i like the effortless flow of it, it has a kind of up beat rhythm kinda like a poetic rap , rather than the slow one ...

ooh, its really nice, i actually nice the lightness and jumpiness of it, i think we need more poetry like this,happy poetry about the little things that make life much ...

Really nice, like the way it started out really dark but lifted toward the end, nice choice of words too, the lines were a bit long, but i think that ...