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Re: Songs Of My Youth
Thhnnx, y'all for reveiwin this poem...n for likin!!!!!! really appreciate it!!!
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Re: Dance
Thanks Tranquility for the reveille...appreciate it!! ;-) Michie Oh
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Re: Love
I really like your poem because its really short just one stanza, four lines...when people write about love or almost any poem about romance they tend to write dozens of ...
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Re: Songs Of My Youth
This is my answer to the question i have been asked over and over... 'so what do you want to be when you grow up' ??? lol :D :D :D ...
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Re: Silence
This is really nice, i like the effortless flow of it, it has a kind of up beat rhythm kinda like a poetic rap , rather than the slow one ...
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Re: Jelly Bean Cars (and Other Things)
Ok this is really nice, wooow, truly amazing...nuff said... wink wink!!! ;-)
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Re: Patricide
Intense and beautifully written, sharp and hitting the point each time!!! nice work!!!likey the name too!!
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Re: Raining
ooh, its really nice, i actually nice the lightness and jumpiness of it, i think we need more poetry like this,happy poetry about the little things that make life much ...
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Re: From Here on Out
Really nice, like the way it started out really dark but lifted toward the end, nice choice of words too, the lines were a bit long, but i think that ...
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Re: This Godly Orphan. Chapter 2, part 2
nice n really proffesional...like!!!
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Re: Farm
oooh i likeyy!!! you really created a picture!!!
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Re: Pretty Girl
Really nice and sweet, truffull and to the poiunt....really like it!!! rock on !!!
Sep 20, 2011 -
Re: Dance
DANCE Dance was my thank-you For music My leap into The sky It was love making With the voice of John Legend The pulsating energy Of a thousand and one ...
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