MiaParamore

Hi and thanks WastedFantasy. I have already posted chapter-2.

Hi. Thanks for putting up the rating. here is the review: My mother and I resembled each other quite a lot.We both have thick, dark, chestnut hair, tall, hunching figures, ...

I want a reply for my story: A Criminal's Heart-Prologue A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA) Chapter-2 I already have many reviews for my prologue but would like to have for chapter ...

I want a reply for my story: A Criminal's Heart-Prologue A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA) Chapter-2 I already have many reviews for my prologue but would like to have for chapter ...

I want a reply for my story: A Criminal's Heart-Prologue A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA) Chapter-2 I already have many reviews for my prologue but would like to have for chapter ...

I have completed the corrections and editing part...

Hi Lavabubblingout. I am here finally to pay you back for all the support and guidance you have been providing me with in these past two months. Seriously, I have ...

I am happy that I could help you out. Do PM me when you come up with next chapter. many people just start off with a story, make people interested ...

In return she just sat and held that grin. I rolled my eyes and she winked back. Laying my head on the desk, I yawned. The morning had been exhausting ...

I also wonder where your narrator is coming from here. Olivia is the one who just killed your narrator, yes? But if she's dead, how is she telling the story? ...

OMG!!!! You are so talented man. The 27 story then this. You have a bright future. Really loved it. Do not have much to say. Try to fill colours in ...

Thanks guys.

I would love to read it if you could provide me with a rating. Sorry, but I am way too fussy about this.

Hi KillTheLights. I really loved the story and the thought behind it. The prologue was short, simple and sweet. There was no grammatical error as such except for the ones ...

Thank you. I will work on the points you all have mentioned.