MiaParamore

Yes, Twilight is doubt about it but its highly overrated which is hiding the work of other great and influential writers.

It is so creative and I couldn't find any errors. keep writing. Are you continuing it?

Thnakj you. I will PM you with future editions.

Thank you curiousvampire.

At a farm? Wow! That's so cool and so much fun to be in. In USA? I am not too good at Sci-fic and neither have I tried ti but ...

Hi and welcome Sophia. YWS is a cool place to hang out in and at the same time learn from others as well as let them help you. What kind ...

However , I do understand that this is the end of everything. I couldn't find any error and I liked this futuristic image you created. Would really like to see ...

You changed the name I guess.

Hi here to review. :D @AnNguyenle: You need to show the writer its mistakes. then only he/she would improve. I mean all i I do is sit in class and ...

WOW!!! For the first time I have seen a character this unique. I loved your wiritng easy going and casual. I specially loved the bracket thing you did for putting ...

Hi I would like a review for my story for which I have posted prologue, chapter 1 and 2. A Criminal's Heart-Prologue A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA) Chapter-2 You may just ...

Thanks again L5na2.

Thanks L5na2.

Hi whatevr88. I loved the story and your easy way of narrating it. I specially got hooked on after reading the secret agent at CIA part. That is amazing and ...

I want a reply for my story: A Criminal's Heart-Prologue A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA) Chapter-2 I already ahve many reviews for my prologue but would like to have for chapter ...