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Re: Witches of Algernon (Part 1 of chpt. 2)
Hi Skittles. As I have said this before, I am loving each and everything of your story. The setting, the weird characters and the MAGIC. here are two mistakes I ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: Lava's Volcano [Active]
Hi Lava. Thanks for reviewing that day. i8 wnat a review for my chapter-3 of a criminal's Heart. Thanks. A criminal's heart chapter-3
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: Will critique everything ...
Hi Standard. I have been writing a piece now for which i have posted prologue,ch-1,2,3. I know its a lot to be critiqued so can you do them step by ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: YWS helped me get published
Wow! Best of luck to you for future! This gives me a hope and an encouragement to read. keep Writing!
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart - Ch-1(Olivia)
Thnak you a lot Ben.
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: I still love you... [Edited]
Can you rate it because generally your stories are 16+ or 18+.
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: Anna and Ryan- their story
Loved it, kg17. I told you never to stop writing and this is very good. very good for your age. I saw many mistakes but as you don't want any ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: Comprehend/ Unfamiliar/Google Ad
loved all of them. Did you win the Doodle for google?
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: Charlotte's Hymn part 1
Hi winnie, I liked your piece but it was hard to know what was going on. Maybe you should read it again and again as a reader and not as ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: non nitpicking reviews - tem. closed
Thank you Napalmerski....Your reviews have helped me a lot. Thanks a lot. I have posted chapter 2 and 3 also if you want to read and don't mind reviewing!
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart - Ch-1(Olivia)
Thanks Napalmerski......This would help a lot..
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: Wanted Review- 'The Heart Of A God'
Hi I want a review for my story. I have posted its prologue, chapter-1, 2,3. I know its difficult so you just read prologue and chapter-1 and give me a ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart Chapter-3
Thank you both of you. I owe a lot to you all.
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: No More "Age Limit"
If there's gonna be an age limit then don't you think the name young should be removed from the site's name.
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: The Pain- Prologue *REVISED*
I loved the story and is surely better than the Lakisha thing you did. Oky, why didn't you PM me for this like you every time do? :( The idea ...
Apr 2, 2010
