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Can you review this for me? Please.. A Criminal's Heart Chapter-2 A criminal's heart chapter-3

No one wants a review? Please let me know. I am craving for doing a review.

Thanks a lot Lava.

Hi Rayquaza . I liked the story very much. It was so much confusing at the end. Now that your project is up, try to expand this into a longer ...

Is there a prologue for this or this is where it starts from. PM me and tell.

Hi I would like a review for my story for which I have posted prologue, chapter 1 and 2 and 3. A Criminal's Heart-Prologue A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA) Chapter-2 You ...

It got featured. Wow!!!!

Ciao there. I love Italy. It's so nice you can play so many instruments because I dont know any. I am not that much involved in music nut I love ...

Oh1 India...Love it. Are you Indian or are you just studying there. Whatever the Indian connect is there. Would love to read your stories. Where's your boarding school? PM me ...

Hi Mike. Welcome to YWS. If you are willing to improve your writing and wan to learn more then i bet this is the best site to be on in ...

Hi. there's a lot of confusion here. I will try read it tomorrow but for now here are some mistakes. That’s when it happened, a sound like t hat of ...

That’s when it happened, a sound like t hat of a metal hitting a surface. With who m ? Were the questions that passed threw my mind. Threw past your ...

AT YOUR SERVICE!!!!! So after a long hiatus, I am opeingin ym reviewing thread once again and would be glad to help you out. Well, I have five stars 8) ...

I know you may not understand this, and that it could cause you more grief than you were meant to bear, but it is your duty to (towards or for ...

Hi Apple. I don't think its bad but neither its anywhere near good. The portion of her neck and chest is way too smaller and awkward then the upper one. ...