MiaParamore

Tahnsk a lot dear.

Prologue: The thought that no one in the world can help you in your greatest need is a great melancholy. It's sad that you will not be able to get ...

Can you do chapter -4 of my novel A Criminal's Heart? Thanks in advance!

Hi Pinkangel. I would highlight the part I liked in green and the part I found forced in red and any corrections would be in different colours. I found her. ...

CHLOE RUSSO 26th June 12: 54 AM We were forging ahead with the case. We had found some footprints which could possibly lead us to the criminal. Tim was not ...

Hi Skutter11. This idea was really good and well presented. To come up with this topic, to think about doing something like this should be appreciated. But you could have ...

Hi Isha. Sorry it took me so long. I loved the story and I have not much to say. You described everything so nicely and I could feel being there. ...

Hey Winter. I checked your review for my story. You are really the right person to get work reviewed done. Can you do more? My same story's other parts need ...

Let them flow in guys...

Hi Masie. I am here as promised. I am loving this story till now. You are painting a very good picture for the reader. Its interesting me a lot. I ...

Thanks RK.

I was just wondering if you can review my novel. It has many chapters though so its your wish if you want to turn them down. Here's the link where ...

Hi Esther. Would you mind reviewing my novel, A criminal's Heart' Here's he link to the main page where you'll find all the chapters of the novel: A criminal's Heart ...

Thanks a lot Isha.

Hi Amanda. Thats one of my character's name. there were no grammar errors I could detect but yes your writing style is quite easy going with minimal use of high ...