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Re: At your service!(BACK FOR BUSINESS)
Hey Jass, your is done! Do PM when you need more! Also, guys I ain't that bad at reviewing so please give me a chance and let me be of ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Thief: Chapter One *Needs help & I hate the title!!*
Hi Jass. Sorry, I'm a bit late. Though Skins has pointed out almost everything, I would try to give my level best to help you out. :? I'll colour what ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart - Ch-5
Thanks a lot to all.
May 4, 2010 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
Would you review this? I am planning of reviving this project and some critique form you would be quite helpful. Seems like Eternity {ch-1} ~Shubhi
May 3, 2010 -
Re: Dollhouse [Ch. 2]
Hi Raz. This part of the story was not as much nice as the last one was. :( This seemed so much confusing and hurried but it can just be ...
May 3, 2010 -
Re: Dollhouse [Ch. 1]
Hello RazHuni. The title of your story finally drew me in. :D Anything I like would be marked with pink (still my fave colour) and anything I hated would be ...
May 3, 2010 -
Re: At your service!(BACK FOR BUSINESS)
Guys, don't you like my sincerity. Please let me do some good deeds :D
May 3, 2010 -
Re: My Mama
Man, there has to be other style to show that the grammar is poor. And what do you emna by my grammar?
May 2, 2010 -
Re: At your service!(BACK FOR BUSINESS)
hey Lydia,your reviews done!
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Swing Chapter 5
Hi Lydia1995. Here on request. Shall we get to the nit-picks first? “Lila, wake up,” gentle hands shook me awake. “I know it’s early, but you’ll be in trouble if ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: My Mama
Hi Impera(If I may call you that)Your story is very much different from what I have been reading here but the thing remains is that your grammar is really poor ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: At your service!(BACK FOR BUSINESS)
Give me some more !
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Popularity Wars Chapter Two
Hi Amy. Back here again. I think I am in love with your writing! :) You're truly gifted and wonderful writer. You should try in for a competition. This story ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Popularity Wars
Hi WritingWords. I had meant to do the review earlier but just couldn't. But I am finally here now. Lets look at the nit-picks:(I will color whatever I like with ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Manga Girl With Nirvana Top
Hi tam_ara. You are really passionate about Manga's it seems. Well, they weren't very good for the truth. But you can really improve. Just follow these steps: :arrow: The neck ...
May 1, 2010
