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Re: Dear Those Who have come to me
OMG! How come no one has liked it yet? Then I will do it now. This was actually a personification, wasn't it? It was well-written and so sweet. I don't ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: Maddy's Magnanimous Reviews! [Open again]
Hi Maddy. I am not sure if you would like to do it or not as you didn't do the last one. :( But anyways, theres a novel I'm working ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: At your service!(BACK FOR BUSINESS)
All done Skins. I had fun reading it. Just fix those things and it would be perfect. :D Anyone else?
May 24, 2010 -
Re: Garden flower (and a random eye)
Hi Mystical. I liked the flower you made, its very neat and sweet. But the thing is that had you made it bigger, I would have liked it. Looks now ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: The Black Widow
Hey there. This was nicely written but I understood nothing. The style of your writing is perfect like in second person but it seemed so much of a mess. She ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: I Don't Want to Die
Hey Skins. I promised you that I would review it this morning and now it is...10:48 AM. Haha :lol:. Well here to review for you. Also, I googled this book-Private ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: Daniel's Way-Chapter 2-(Critiques Needed!)
I'm back here again, Arya. Again I would like if you could bold the title of the chapter. And also, you have good titles and names to the chapters. I ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: Daniel's Way-Chapter 1- (Critiques Welcome)
Hi there Arya. I'll be your reviewer for today. I hope I can help, even if its a bit. Daniel's Way is the story of a disturbed young man who ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: Let Me Love You(4)
Hey Tiffany. Here again. I thought that I would read every chapter but not post a review, but then I badly wanted to review something and I felt reviewing it. ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: So,, I'm pretty much me, who are you?
Hi Saga. Welcome to YWS first. And yes I agree with you. Screaming is the best thing in the whole world. I follow it a lot. :D This is a ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: Greetings, people of earth.
Welcome to YWS. Fanfics? Well I don't write them but yeah I have read a few here at YWS. So i would be happy to read yours. That would be ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: Aw Snap, Reviews!
Hey I was just wondering if you could review my novel-A Criminal's Heart. I have posted seven chapters plus a prologue. Tun it down if you don't wanna. :D The ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: Saved on the Killer Mountain- Chapter One
Hey Emily. I loved this story so far. I wanted to do the review a while before but hen I thought it would be boring as its religious(No offence). But ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: free reviews all around
Hey Tiffany. Would you love doing next part of my story? Seventh chapter is up and I need reviews on that. The link is in my signature. Thanks in advance! ...
May 22, 2010 -
Re: Bits and Pieces
HEy Embee..these all are great specially the perspective on the one with your grandpa in it. I didn't much like the ballerina one,I found the angle very dull. The first ...
May 22, 2010
