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  • Fantasy Novels Re: Distraught: Chapter 1

    Hey Day. I believe that I am a bit late. *coco and Isabella have pretty much covered everything, so I would give a general review and sorry if it doesn't ...

    Jun 26, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Dreaming By The Window (short story)

    Hey there, Sol! :D The first thing that struck me was there was no proper spacing between your note and the story. Either you could have made it into a ...

    Jun 26, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Bring it on! (Open)

    Lil yours and Day yours is done. Working on LastPaladin. Hopes to finish it soon. 8) ~Shubhi

    Jun 26, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: (ch 1.1) una sola rosa, mi jardin...un solo amigo, mi mundo

    First of all, Hola Chika !...(that's all the Spanish I know) Well first of all I want to ask one thing: You really live in Egypt? Wowwww..... *jumping up with ...

    Jun 26, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Bring it on! (Open)

    Well I am glad I got so many request and I will be sure to help each of you out. ~Shubhi

    Jun 26, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Vampire Prison - Chapter One

    Hey Tamara. I am so happy that I could get you to type what probably you have been hiding there for months. First thing that struck me was that you ...

    Jun 19, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Bring it on! (Open)

    All reviews are done. Anyone willing to get their novel reviewed? Hey guy I thoiught you would be very excited to get reviews done, but turns out I was wrong.

    Jun 19, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: deleted

    Hey I liked the concept. But don't you think it's very long to be called a prologue “And what about you?” I, object. " A husband protects his wife.” “Even ...

    Jun 19, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: An Open Letter

    Hey bookgeek. Despite whatever others have said, I liked it. It gave me a neat feeling. I agree with ofi r though that the concept wasn't different but I liked ...

    Jun 19, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: really bad....

    Hey Calligraphy. So I must say that these were pretty good but hey there is always a scope of improvement in them. THe ifrst one was the best for em ...

    Jun 19, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Goddess of the Cosmos

    This picture looks very cool after the effects you have added into it. The rays just add more shimmer and shine into this already beautiful piece, which is superb. I ...

    Jun 19, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: "Unfortunately... I love you" Chapter 3 (Draft #1)

    Hey I am back yet again. “Okay that building over there is for the boys,” She said pointing at it. “and that other building is for the girls, now go ...

    Jun 19, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: "Unfortunately... I love you" Chapter 2 (Draft #1)

    Hey Solvalery. Here to review again. You have got some pretty good reviews from others so I won't bother you repeating the same what they have. I have mentioned one ...

    Jun 19, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: "Unfortunately... I love you" Chapter 1 (Draft #1)

    Hey here to review, of course. The beginning paragraph : Well, it was kinda boring. I mean the concept of the pigeons coming to her was very cute and sweet, ...

    Jun 19, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Trouble With Titanium-- Ch. 2

    Hey Angela. Here I am at last to review the secind chapter. So here goes the review: Well I myelf want to be a fashion designer so it suddenly caught ...

    Jun 19, 2010


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