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Re: fire-bird chapter 2
Hey, I am back again! :) First of all, before commenting on the story, I'd like to add that you should post your story in the 'Story' format we have ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: Deep Magic remake: Part 1
Hey Leth!Sorry for the late-ness but I am here. Staring back at her was a pale young man with close cropped brown hair and ocean blue eyes. They weren’t to ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: Fire-bird chapters prologue and chapter 1
Hey Point! :) Prologue: What I think of it is a sweet introduction to the novel, which is short but you can add in more melodrama to it. Prologues are ...
Dec 2, 2010 -
Re: Bring it on! (Open)
What? You don't like my reviews anymore? :(
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [14]
Hey Pink, Shubhi here to review. There were tears leaking from the corner of her eyes and I knew those weren’t from physical pain but from the thought that she ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Bring it on! (Open)
Done with you, Skins. Anybody else? :wink:
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter One)
Hey Rhian! Shubhi here. I'll review now. If his sister didn’t stay up so late, he’d have just been able to leave his room through the door, sneak downstairs, maybe ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Bring it on! (Open)
All set and done. Anyone else craving for my reviews? :wink:
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Deleted
Hey Tams! Here I am to review you. I hope I don't disappoint you. October 2nd 2005 When you're giving the whole date, you include a comma after the date ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Blood Stains (From my novel)
Hey Gheala, here I am. I hope I am of some true help to you. Her horrified dead eyes and the blue color of her skin weren’t what ripped my ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [13] End Part One
Hey there, Pinky! So don't think I was waiting for your request to come and then I was planning on to review this-not at all. Dad! My feet continued down ...
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: Bring it on! (Open)
Skins is done...Just Ghe left, would take her up later today or tomorrow. Thanks guys, and I am accepting requests. :D
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Prologue)
Hey Skins, here to review! The operating room doors hesitantly opened, revealing a rather small man wearing a green surgeon’s outfit. Um, this sounded kind of weird. Like the doors ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Bring it on! (Open)
Idraa done, need to do Skins and Gheala's....Tomorrow!
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Alezrani chapter 1
Hey there Idra, Shubhi here to review. Late, but finally here. So yay! lol The coffee shop, Esnatzen, was empty when Seres walked in; the moss green carpet, filled with ...
Nov 18, 2010
