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Re: THE Review Thread
Hey Stella, would you mind reviewing Turning the Tables(1.1) Please and thanks! :wink:
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Needs new shoes.
Could you do this? Please and thanks. Let me know if there's some fiction you'd like reviewed. ~Shrubbery
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Bring it on! (Open)
All set and done. Rachael removed her piece, so couldn't review that , but I'll review it when she asks me to. And I am done with Pointy. I can't ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: The Magi {ch. 6}
Hey, there! First of all, I just felt that your speech for Kevin when he was slurring wasn't looking like slurred words, but rather some different sort of accent. But ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: The Magi {ch.5}
Hey Pointy. Shrubs here. I won't leave a big note here, just few things. I don't want to spam this thing or anything, and besides I'll give a more thorough ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: The Magi {ch. 4}
Hey, there, PD! Kevin flipped a switch, bathing the room in a soft buttery glow. I like the description here, Point. To start off with. I guess your beginning was ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: I think you should let me review your work. :)
Hey there, Pari. Would you mind reviewing Turning the Tables(1.1) Hope you enjoy it.
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: The Magi {ch. 3}
Hey. I am back again. So this is short, so I guess it'd be easier to nitpick it. I would have to disagree with Pari(sorry, dear), but what I feel ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: New Here and Would Love to Review
Hey, Em! You didn't say you'd be interested in reviewing novels, but would you mind first chapter? Here it is(It's fine if you don't want to): Turning the Tables(1.1) Please ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: The Magi {ch. 2}
Hey Point. Here again. Hope I'll be able to deliver some more help this time. For the beginning in this chapter, I think there could not have been anything better. ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: The Magi {Ch. 1}
Hey there Point! “You know the answer to that question , Kevin Price.” When you refer to a person directly, then you have a comma after or before the name, ...
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: I'm new and would love a welcome!
Hey Katie. :D Welcome to YWS, it's fun place to be around. You have loads of things to do, and I seriously mean a lot. You can start reading random ...
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: Rach-and-Ribbit Reviews, Inc.
Hey Rachael. COuld you review Turning the Tables(1.1) I am not happy with it, but your wonderful review could help me. ^_^ Thanks, and you ARE awesome.
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Fight for Darkheim(Accepting)
This SB is a collaboration between myself, Shrubbery and Tigersprite. It will start soon, and if you're interested, you can reserve a spot by commenting below. Concept: Dr. Aiden had ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Bring it on! (Open)
All done, I am accepting more requests, but you'd have to wait a while. Like two-three days?
Jan 17, 2011