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Re: Bring it on! (Open)
No one? :O
May 11, 2011 -
Re: I Might Just Surprise You.
Hey Nike. I just came to drop a comment. I like your writing style, and it's different than what we get to read here. Although I would say that it ...
May 10, 2011 -
Re: The Devil's Pocket Watch (1)
Yo, Dad! What's up? *don't say ceiling* :lol: Anyway, Shrubs here to review. “And that sucks. You know that riding is the only thing I like doing and now he ...
May 10, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 12)
Hey Skins, Shrubs here to review. Sorry it took me almost two long days to come here. I should have been here earlier. Every kind of resistance I’d ever built ...
May 10, 2011 -
Re: The Devil's Pocket Watch
Hey Pink! His mother lifted him up and around her waist then jogged for shelter. Around her waist what? Lavira used her tan fingers to wipe her dark , thick ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Blue Pain
Hey Rach! :) Cool blue water rippling gently against the rocks. I don't really think it's cool what you're looking for. Cool is something not which I think fits here. ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Of Wild Flowers-chapter 1
Hey Snoopy! I saw you needed a review for this so I just came. :) “Why do they shine like that , Mum?” I asked around the lollypop that was ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Prologue)
Hey Skins! You didn't ask for a review on this one, but I wanted to review something so here I was. :) In the 10th century only the rich could ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: The Spare~1 (Edited)
Hey Tabby! Shrubs here to review. I hope I can be of some help to you. :) The child was adored, and protected more carefully th a n anything in ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Bring it on! (Open)
Not actually done since poetry isn't my thing. So anyone? :)
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Finding Perfection.
Thanks for supporting me, mum! :mrgreen: Actually I meant 'shabby' exactly in the sense it is used in. There were so many mistakes that it didn't give a neat feeling ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: The words are only rain.
Hey, Jass! I don't accept poetry reviews and sadly I do want to review it but I can't find anything to comment on. Poetry is not my cup of tea ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Bring it on! (Open)
All done! Anyone else? :)
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Unity
Hey Phoenix! Welcome to YWS! I'd be happy to help you out with your story, as always. :) I remember that night when we all came together, repaired broken friendships, ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Finding Perfection.
Hey Kaka! What's up? I am so glad you've finally come out of the Writer's Block shell and written something. Bravo! Now it doesn't actually matter if it would be ...
May 5, 2011
