MiaParamore

Hi horselovergo12 Thank you for going through the story.I hope you get more time to read other chapters.The thing you pointed out is exactly what I am worried about.I know ...

Thank you all for liking my work and telling me how I could really improve it.I'll definitely work on the points.

hi guys my forst story at YWS.Hope you enjoy it!!!!!!!! :elephant: SOMEWHERE LOST Chapter-1 I was running after her in the dark lonely street."Stop Melanie,"I cried.She was so scared she ...

Somewhere Lost Prologue HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT!!!!!!!!! Everything was looking black.Slowly ,my eyes were closing it's shutter and I was losing the hope.What if I would never be able ...

I liked the story,the plot.Your description of Selena is in my head but not much about the narrator is being told.Considering your age,I think you are writing.You have a long ...

Hi tam-ara. The story was nice to read but honestly speaking I have watched a similar Hindi film and have read a similar story.But your description was beautiful.

Hi Hannah :D I read your story but sorry to say it couldn't grab my attention.Maybe too little was posted.Your character 'Megan' is being really weird.Abusing mother is not good.I ...

:D Hi all.This is going to be my first story to be posted.I have written many stories but,none,I think is post-able.Give me honest comments as I am here to improve ...