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Hi mikeetrinidad, So, you have lot to improve in grammar but I really think you can improve. I was keen to read it but I think there are far too ...

Hi Ayumi, Your drawing and sketching is fabulous and you should keep posting more work. I specilly liked your German Shephard and the shading for it.

Hi, The best thing in the portrait is the shading and hairstyles.You need to change her lips and nose a bit.make her nose less wide. Keep up !!!!!!!

Hi, :D Here to review your work again. I hope this helps.Your chapters are too short and even when the cahpter 2 is complete, reader has less idea about the ...

Hi Kaywiia, It was a nice story and you could call it a prologue for it serves that purpose should go more in detail about world depression .Some mistakes have ...

Hi Ahuha, WELCOME TO YWS !!!!!!!! :D I like your passion for writing. Even though Lena is right that you are too young to be a member of this site ...

hi twelfth night, Your idea was original and totally entertaining.If you are planning a parody to Twilight and Eclipse then go ahead with me when you complete it. This should ...

Thank you Elinor. I also want o make it smaller but don't know how to.If you know than PM me.

Hi twiight12, So honestly speaking it was too long and boring.Your concept is nice but you don't know how to make it interesting for the readers. Everything happents too quickly. ...

He Lena, It is such a beautiful story. i wanted to cry just like TheNewHero wanted to.I couldn't find any flaws and your idea of writing things of past in ...

Hi, This was a nicely written story.I hope you continue it.

Oh my god. What a wonderful story , Yuriko.The story was nice but your grammar and spellings need some help.You should probably try and read this again and find your ...

Hi BlackSocialist, I am in total awe.The story is looking like a masterpiece.i have one problem. 'The second man attempted to stop bob, grabbing his arm.' It should be Bob ...

Hi Everyone else has already given their comments on your grammar so I won't focus more on thta.Your writing style is unique and impressive.But why the hell soldiers didn't have ...

I read till ' Sandpaper stay still.........". i left in the middle because I want a rating so I could read it. I foyu could do that I am ready ...