MiaParamore

He was going off to work i n the countryside, i n a small town called Elk Creek, Nebraska. The space between 'in' needs to be removed. What mattered were ...

@KAt:You opt for other colour like red or something or grammar. Blue and Purple are getting a bit confusing.

“Now, I need you teenagers to scram. I don’t want to run the risk of you ,” he pointed a worn finger at Talia, “getting captured.” Just change this and ...

Wanna review guys. I am free for my holidays have started. Send in your requests. i would love to review them..

Is this teh continuation of Mia"Bruised and Beaten. if yes then let the title be same. i thought it's another story until I saw the name Mia...

Hi there. Welcome to YWS !!!!!!!!!! Hope you enjoy and no more hide your writings..

Hi there Chiquita. Here again. I think the picture is superb. i specially liked the blurred background. Keep going!!!!!!!!!

it's superb.According to me you don't need to change on anything.

I will go through your story today..

Welcome to YWS . Why his sad username when ur own name is pretty? Well we all know we'll die. if you have a ny queries you can PM Rosey ...

Hi Chiquita. Well this one is not as good as the last one. Her you have focused much on leaves and oher things nad somewhere have lost the focus on ...

Thanks. I would try to make it in a short dress.

Thannks peanut.

Hi there. It was sweet and short as deafwriter_19 earlier mentioned. As it was short and had not much to tell I couldn't find an grammar mistakes so that's good. ...

Hey Kat. I couldn't see the picture and make out it's beauty. While I am writing thsi I even don't know what it's about. Lava's right, you need to resize ...