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Hi LittlePetRock. I know sometimes it gets tedious to review someone else's piece but once you start doing it,it becomes fun. Can you review this? Finding me back- prologue A ...

Your review is done Nephthys. KEep writing!!!!

Hi. I am here as requested. I am in total awe. It was a wonderfully carved story. I am astonished that why it wasn't featured? I like your writing style. ...

Hi again. it's the column where you can request for reviews. Here's the link: Will Review for Food ANy more questions? PM me. :D

So Aspiring Author has already made you a friend it seems. Well hi and welcome to YWS. Hope you enjoy here. Science Fiction? It seems interesting. And it is so ...

Excuse me to both of you, I have a right to voice my views and she has that much sense to understand what is right. So please don't comment and ...

Well this is extraordinarily short, and the language you've used in writing it is simple, bland, not at all what you want to read in a story most of the ...

I am splitting it into two. I have been working on that for two days. Maybe I will post the new, fresh chapter-1 tomorrow.

Hi there. I am here to review for you today. All the words or letters that I have added will be in blue nad the ones I need you to ...

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Hi I can review your work. Just PM me the link or go the Will Review for Food column..

Hi there. Welcome to YWS. I completely have no idea what you and Aspiringauthor were talking about. Hope to see you around.

It's looking too big to read at one go. Split it into paras..

the review is done Maddy..

I ma speechless. Not in a good sense. i don't know what to comment. Why did you post it? What is this supposed to indicate? If you are new to ...