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Hi can you review this for me? A Criminal's Heart

Hi I want a review for my story. Here's the link: A Criminal's Heart

Anyone for a review??? Don't make me beg.

Sorry I can't. It's rated 18+. Anyone interested? I don't bite( sorry for copying this line from someone).

Hi Mr. Knightley. it's a beautiful and serene picture. the sunlight is adding that extra effect. The bush on left is spoiling the picture a nit but that's fine. Try ...

I am not familiar with Hayley Williams so i am not the best person o critique. But I like the girl's sketch. it's simple and beautiful at the same time. ...

Thanks Ben and Elinor. i will go through the mistakes.

shubhiloves2write wrote: But why were they crying? We were going to meet after nine months so why did they mourn? Maybe we weren’t going to meet. It's a fantasy dear ...

Can you review these two for me? A Criminal's Heart Seems like Eternity

Hi. now that you have resized the picture, i think I will be able to comment. The hairstyle is awesome. I wish I also had same type of hair. The ...

Hey Biffle1. I think you have got a talent for writing. Your others post have been rated mostly 16+ and 18+ so I couldn't go through it. I like the ...

Can you review both of these? They are different stories. you take your time. Thanks in advance. Seems like Eternity

Can you review this for me: Seems like Eternity in Historical Fiction. it's recent so you will find it easily.

Hi i am here again to review your story. It was indeed a nice read and I am really excited to read more and see what happens next. -> When ...

Writer's note->I have posted this story two times before with different names but everytime delete it because I wasn't satisfied. Hope you like it. I have brought in minor changes. ...