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Thank you TEnnisPrincess. I would be writing soon and I loved your avataar.

Hi there. You have definitely made a progress sine the prologue. Okay, you named it Nightmares but there was nothing to do with it. The stoy is going fine.Here are ...

Yeah I would like some comments on my novel. I have postedprologue and chapter one. Thanks. I am in much need of reviews for my chapter-1. LINKS: A Criminal's Heart-Prologue ...

Hey Quetseli. This story is awesome. I loved it. You are creating a new type of species and you will give them your own created history which is amazing. I ...

Hi fictionfanatic.I loved your story. You wrote it beautifully and I could feel and picture everything happening there. For the dialogue, you can write them in singe-single line instead of ...

Hi. So I am also clueless on how to make this picture big. Well s it was small i couldn't get a clear picture but whatever I saw was nice. ...

Welcome to YWS. Hope you write well and enjoy here.

Hi can you review this for me. It's the prologue and chapter-1. U can just read the prologue if you want but I need reviews for my chapter-1. Thanks. A ...

Nice sketch!!!!!!! Keep sketching!

It was not well-written but you have a good story. I would like to see where it goes from here. Maybe you should read the piece once more. You will ...

Lovely story!! It is for the first time I couldn't find an error. So good! Though you need to go through the prologue once more!! It has some confusing sentences. ...

A n hour later I woke up the hospital, except I was looking at my disorientated body. Hour is a silent vowel. it has a sound of 'aa' The later ...

Hi Kanen. it's the first time here I have read a story with an animal character. It was refreshing. I liked the concept. i think you are going to continue ...

I bent down over a sink in a bathroom I’ve never been into. How did I end ed (you never use past form with did') up here? The last thing ...

Hi Casey. i wanted to read this story yesterday but I didn't have time. Anyways, here I am. Hope I help you. Here are the nit-picks: I’m terrified , I’ll ...