MiaParamore

Thanks. I will surely work on the errors.

Written lots of shorts, a quickly declining fanfic going on somewhere, and a novel which stagnated at chapter 2 because I can't stop revising it. I am also stuck at ...

Hi and welcome to YWS!!!!! I have a friend with the same name. I hope you get what you want here on YWS. People here are really helpful.You can PM ...

Ha! You gave a beautiful surprise ending with a thriller. The suspense! It was very difficult to point out mistakes from your piece. You write simply and still touch the ...

Thank you Lava.

Hi. I loved the story. you explained it smoothly and perfectly. Going to read chapter-2. Thanks for rating it and posting a tiny bit so one can read it at ...

Jessy Annies said This is really good. From the very beginning you capture the audience's attention, by starting at the climax. Just a little thing. At the end when the ...

i am glad my reviews could be of some help.

Why? I design well and you are the first person to tell me to stop. Even if you don't like it then don't discourage me. Every piece can be improved ...

The dialogue, in my opinion, was a little stiff. No matter how hard Amanda is trying to give a sweet impression to the public, not even the best fakers have ...

Thank you peanut19 for doing this review on my request. Thanks a ton. I have edited it.

Welcome to YWS first. So this is your first post here and I will be your first reviewer. I will copy all the story and tell you the errors which ...

Hi. I am here to review. I loved the concept of the story and the setting. I could actually imagine all this and for some time I was transported to ...

Do you have a prologue for this or this is where it starts from.

I prefer not to listen to anything as my concentration is very low and I am very much restless. But yeah I love to listen soft, light music.