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Re: Angelic Heathen
Ah! Nice pose dear and awesome picture. The tattoo is so unique and creative. I loved the picture.
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: Frecar - Prologue
I am only 15 and so far I’ve become the world’s strongest being. [b]At least in this world.You see, I live on a planet that has 3 moons. /b] When ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: Hello!
Hi Lily. Believe me, you will enjoy here at YWS!!! REALLY. i wish you all the best fro completing your novel.
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: First few bits from my unnamed novel. *Edited!*
Hey Isha. I am finally here to read your second post, a story. I liked your story but just one thing. Was the man in third part the same one ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: Hello!!!
Hi Martina. Welcome to YWS.Nice and funky username. i would love to read your story if you could PM me the link or the genre. It would be more convenient. ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart - Ch-1(Olivia)
Thanks! isha. Working on your story.
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: Infected- Chapter 1.
This seems so much like I Am Ledgend... and as i said before, you need to add more. I completely agree with Biffle. Why everyone here is after Will Smith ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart-Prologue (REVISED)
Thanks! Isha.
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: My heart in your hands.
Awesome poem! you have definitely got talent for poems.I liked the feel, rhyming and prose. Loved it.
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: The Creation of Emily part 2
This day was turning out to be pretty unfortunate…wasn’t it ? Okay, so your writing style is not very good and I found many mistakes which can be solved by ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: The Creation of Emily
I loved the story. keep writing! Going to check in chapter 1
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: The Diamond - Chapter 1
Hi. I liked the jealousy factor Alicia has ands it sounds normal. So the ook is called 'diamonds' and there was no description or story of it. I think you'll ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: Pictures from a rock.
hi. It's amazing. these pictures tempt me to come to USA. Wow!!!
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: untitled chapter 1
Hi BigM I liked the story a lo but I think it was too short to be called a prologue. Maybe you cna add more things as to how Jess ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: Sun-Prolouge
Hi there Bunnie. I liked the concept of the story. At least it's something different than icebergs. Great start to what can be a wonderful story. Keep Writing!!!!!
Mar 23, 2010
