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Re: I shall review you! *Accepting*
Hi. I have posted chapter-2 of my novel.' A Criminal's Heart'. You are already familiar with it. Here's the link:
Mar 27, 2010 -
Re: Daring Frankie Ch. 2. Plz review!
In exactly seventeen minutes and around thirty seconds, class ends. I'm staring at my watch, taking a break from my doodles, waiting for the class to end. I think it's ...
Mar 27, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart- Chapter 2
Writer's Note-> Okay, I am posting chapter-2 after a long time. Its comparatively shorter than others but I wanted too introduce Josh's personal life. If you have already read the ...
Mar 27, 2010 -
Re: Daring Frankie: Ch. 1 (Repost/edit)
Hi Amnien, I loved the story and your narration style but I have one problem with this. The synopsis says that it is about Frankie but he seems to be ...
Mar 27, 2010 -
Re: the GIRL in the mirror.
Loved it! It is good if it's a random pic. Your friend's look is giving a haunted look. Haunted pics!!!!!
Mar 27, 2010 -
Re: Problem creating a group
So if I do many reviews I will be a featured member?
Mar 26, 2010 -
Re: Her. Him. It. They. Chapter 1: Her
I like the idea. Is it something like soul changing. If yes,then be careful with writing as many people get confused. BEST OF LUCK!!!
Mar 26, 2010 -
Re: Problem creating a group
I ahve a problem creating a group. The link for the form Nate has asked to fill is showng nothing. Anyone who can help? I have six people interested. Also ...
Mar 26, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart-Prologue (REVISED)
I have edited it but I am still not satisfied fully. Will do something more. Then I will PM everyone who helped me with this. Anymore comments?
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: First try at short story
Hi there. i will be your reviewer for today. Well, if it was for a short story assignment then it was good butthere was so much you could have explained ...
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: First few bits from my unnamed novel. *Edited!*
I will read it for sure! And I will suggest a name after reading it when I have more idea about the story!
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: A Poem About Twilight
I am a Twilight fan but I enjoyed this poem. though at some places you nedd to fit the rHyming scheme a bit. Let me know if I can help.
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: In the end
If you are working on other part of this, let me know when it's complete.
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: Who is my Daughter?
HI Maegardens. I really liked he story and wold wish you to never stop writing this. PM me when you have more. Can't wait to see where it goes. " ...
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: Crystals
Hi there. I loved the symmetry and how the objects became smaller and smaller till the end. Loved these crystals. Try taking the same picture with some colourful base. Some ...
Mar 24, 2010
