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Mhelton28

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Last war

    I think that you could increase the amount of detail in your story so that we can picture the characters and settings better. Your story also moved fast, you should ...

    Sep 21, 2007
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Reasons To Kill

    Personally I think you had a good idea, and good detail to your story. The only problem I saw was that it wasn't long enough for me to develop any ...

    Sep 21, 2007


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