Mhelton28

I think that you could increase the amount of detail in your story so that we can picture the characters and settings better. Your story also moved fast, you should ...

Personally I think you had a good idea, and good detail to your story. The only problem I saw was that it wasn't long enough for me to develop any ...

This is a copy of my original short story that I wrote. While I want you to be critical, please remember that this is my first short story. The Painter. ...

Hello there, I am new to the young writer's society, I recently discovered my passion for writing and am constantly comming up with new Ideas everyday. I was just saying ...