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Re: A Soul Untouched
good read! very well written. I have to confess that I'm not a fan of vampire-love stories, but this one did exactly what it was meant to do. Draw the ...
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Re: Time to wake up Buttercup
thank you ^^ I'm flattered! Yes I will finish this story in some time, I'll post the whole story when it's finished. Could you please tell me where you found ...
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Re: You Can Run, But You Can't Hide.
hmm, you have a story here. I liked that it was fast, but I'm not sure if that's intentional or just poor grammar. I'm assuming this main character is a ...
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Re: Concrete
that ending is really great, the line drawn between nature and concrete... I loved that! actually the whole poem was great. It flows naturally, good job.
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Re: deaf to tears
All that I've done is reeked with the stench of love a selfishness while martyrs scream My pride was their downfall they will never get to feel this pain A ...
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Re: Time to wake up Buttercup
“Time to wake up buttercup. The anaesthetic should have long worn off already” I opened my eyes, but immediately squeezed them together again. The light was too bright. With my ...
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Re: You should have known!
I think this is a most sincere piece of text. I can tell you wrote this from your heart. I once wrote something very much like this too, and like ...
Jul 10, 2011
