Metalmauzen

“Time to wake up buttercup. The anaesthetic should have long worn off already” I opened my eyes, but immediately squeezed them together again. The light was too bright. With my ...

Hello there, The last time I did a review was a long, long time ago and even then I didn't write much reviews, but here goes. First things first. The ...

Of course I don't have the music that goes with it, but I have to say I'm not quite touched by your lyrics here. I like the verses. Good vocabulary ...

Well, goal achieved! This is good stuff, and if possible can you send me an mp3 or some sort of video or something when everything is put together? I love ...

This was...really, really good. I first had my doubts to even start reading this, becuase it's fairly long and... well, it's a romantic story. Glad that I did though. Tops: ...

really nice suspense in this story, but what I like even more are the dialouges. They seemed very natural, how they acted and reacted at each other. Kudo's for that. ...

It's indeed interesting and short. I'm a little amazed how you could fit in so much character, drama and other information in so little space. (that is a compliment) I'm ...

Although I don't know exactly what you're talking about in your first spoiler, I did like this poem. It has this authentic sadness. I can't help but sympathize this angel. ...

you've got my blessing

it's corrected thank you

This is really something else, I would love to read 300 pages filled with this story.

I bit my tongue and I'm tasting the blood it hurts me although it doesn't seem like a lot you pulled out all your weapons and took the shot Now ...

Sunburn - Muse

are you kidding me? I just read your work, it was awesome. You sure have some talent you only need to expand it a little more. Keep writing and try ...

ah thanks ;) I corrected it