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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: A seriously bad story.

    Ah I see. Anyway, I just don't care for that.

    Sep 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Sunsets

    Thanks. This is a great review!

    Sep 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: A small scenery on earth.

    You're welcome. We all are bad at something in writing. I put too many commas and usually people say i don't have enough description

    Sep 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Sunsets

    I assume you are a Christian?

    Sep 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Sunsets

    Great!

    Sep 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Sunsets

    Great!

    Sep 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Sunsets

    I don't mean to pressure you into liking it. only put it if you think it deserves it.

    Sep 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Sunsets

    Only leave a like if you think it is good enough.

    Sep 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Sunsets

    I meant to say leave a like if you thought it deserved it. If not, don't like it. it is edited now, so you might want to re-read it.

    Sep 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Sunsets

    All edited for the final time. Leave a like if you think it deserves it.

    Sep 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Sunsets

    All done! tell me what you think. BTW, I wanted it to be awe-inspiring, because that is how I feel every time i see a sunset.

    Sep 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Psalm 23 . . . my meditation on it

    Thanks for the poem. For me this is what i believe, and this is what I write, so it wasn't really something I thought about as being courageous, but I'm ...

    Sep 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Sunsets

    Thanks a lot tgirly. I will get on those lines right away. I did notice how many times I used And as the beginning of a line. I'm glad you ...

    Sep 14, 2013
  • » Re: Is It a Dream? Chapter 1 Confusion

    S I edited those things you pointed out. If you had reviewed when I first put this up then your review would've most likely been about three times a s ...

    Sep 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Kingdom of Boredom, Chpt. 11

    I was just skimming through and spotted this. It should be come on, not come one. Don’t you dare say ‘Chestnut.’” Fiera scolded. “Come one, you can come up with ...

    Sep 13, 2013


The only distinction that makes one a hero is constantly fighting back your villain arc.
— RangerofIthilien