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Re: A seriously bad story.
Ah I see. Anyway, I just don't care for that.
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: Sunsets
Thanks. This is a great review!
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: A small scenery on earth.
You're welcome. We all are bad at something in writing. I put too many commas and usually people say i don't have enough description
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: Sunsets
I assume you are a Christian?
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: Sunsets
Great!
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: Sunsets
Great!
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: Sunsets
I don't mean to pressure you into liking it. only put it if you think it deserves it.
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: Sunsets
Only leave a like if you think it is good enough.
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: Sunsets
I meant to say leave a like if you thought it deserved it. If not, don't like it. it is edited now, so you might want to re-read it.
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: Sunsets
All edited for the final time. Leave a like if you think it deserves it.
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: Sunsets
All done! tell me what you think. BTW, I wanted it to be awe-inspiring, because that is how I feel every time i see a sunset.
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: Psalm 23 . . . my meditation on it
Thanks for the poem. For me this is what i believe, and this is what I write, so it wasn't really something I thought about as being courageous, but I'm ...
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: Sunsets
Thanks a lot tgirly. I will get on those lines right away. I did notice how many times I used And as the beginning of a line. I'm glad you ...
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: Is It a Dream? Chapter 1 Confusion
S I edited those things you pointed out. If you had reviewed when I first put this up then your review would've most likely been about three times a s ...
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: The Kingdom of Boredom, Chpt. 11
I was just skimming through and spotted this. It should be come on, not come one. Don’t you dare say ‘Chestnut.’” Fiera scolded. “Come one, you can come up with ...
Sep 13, 2013
