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Re: When the Moon Vanished
Some sentences are a bit of a read, grammatically speaking. There were also parts where the description ran on a bit too long, or tried to do too many things ...
Sep 17 -
Re: When the Moon Vanished
haha thanks for the enthusiasm. I forgot to disclaim that this was a 2k short story for a competition I was in so that might be part of why some ...
Sep 17 -
Re: Render No Surrender
oh! aight is also ai-ght if you say it right. and money flow is a subtle allusion to water issues :[
Sep 16 -
Re: Render No Surrender
hiii Wolfi. Yeah, there's a lot going on in this one haha. I used both Bible verses after seeing a preacher podcast with an AI cover photo and kinda spiraled. ...
Sep 16 -
Re: Fury in the Wind chp.1 - The Foreign Battalion
hi tikaya. So it is my 2jd draft but its a complete rewrite soo, kinda a 1st draft still? lol I actually was told originally that this chapter explained too ...
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Re: The Dragon's Vale (Prologue) - WIP Novella; won't be updated for a while)
that makes a lot of sense xD
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Re: "that'll be £27.90, see you in six months."
well that's terrifying xD
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Re: The Studio {Prologue}
im just here for the holy guacamole (I wear a shirt to volleyball that has an avocado blocking a hit and it reads "holy blockamole")
Aug 6 -
Re: A Duel with the Emerald Dragon
sorry if you get multiple notifications. I accidentally sent this as a comment first so I had to delete and reupload
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Re: Fury in the Wind chp 14 - The Impossible
haha thank you so much for stopping by. I beta read 3 novels during infancy when I couldnt get baby M transferred to the crib xD so I know the ...
Aug 2 -
Re: Fury in the Wind chp 14 - The Impossible
😂😂😂😂😂
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Re: Fury in the Wind chp 11 - The Hostile Hostel
hahaha so Kenway isn't a bad guy but it's amusing seeing everyone who didnt read the prologue take his story to seem so fishy. Makes me think maybe Carris should ...
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Re: Fury in the Wind chp 9 - Friend or Foe
Kenway is the GOAT no doubt about it
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Re: Fury in the wind chp 6 - Stumbling Through the Woods
ph my goodness yes. Tikaya said there were chapters that seemed out of order but all the titles looked correct. Thats definitely what happened so yes this comes right before
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Re: Fury in the Wind Prologue - A Shadow in the Snow
okay so the "monster" is kinda brand new and unknown 😂 so it isnt a piece of lore per se that folds in
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