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Re: The Studio {Prologue}
im just here for the holy guacamole (I wear a shirt to volleyball that has an avocado blocking a hit and it reads "holy blockamole")
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Re: A Duel with the Emerald Dragon
sorry if you get multiple notifications. I accidentally sent this as a comment first so I had to delete and reupload
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Re: Ashes to Ashes - A Short Story
there's a certain dryness to her humor. I think even just adding a "let's try to not make a zombie this time" would work. And then when it does something ...
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Re: Ashes to Ashes - A Short Story
ah cool i just did a similar contest in June and the parameters definitely made it hard to tell the story exactly how i wanted. Foe the difference between a ...
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Re: Fury in the Wind chp 14 - The Impossible
haha thank you so much for stopping by. I beta read 3 novels during infancy when I couldnt get baby M transferred to the crib xD so I know the ...
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Re: Fury in the Wind chp 14 - The Impossible
😂😂😂😂😂
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Re: Fury in the Wind chp 11 - The Hostile Hostel
hahaha so Kenway isn't a bad guy but it's amusing seeing everyone who didnt read the prologue take his story to seem so fishy. Makes me think maybe Carris should ...
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Re: Fury in the Wind chp 9 - Friend or Foe
Kenway is the GOAT no doubt about it
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Re: Fury in the wind chp 6 - Stumbling Through the Woods
ph my goodness yes. Tikaya said there were chapters that seemed out of order but all the titles looked correct. Thats definitely what happened so yes this comes right before
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Re: Fury in the Wind Prologue - A Shadow in the Snow
okay so the "monster" is kinda brand new and unknown 😂 so it isnt a piece of lore per se that folds in
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Re: Fury in the Wind chp. 3 - All the Djoni horses, all the Wsiwan men
lol those were not world building notes, I just put them there since I dont have a pronunciation page xD same thing with the ones in chapter 1
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Re: Fury in the Wind chp 7 - The Final Straw
they are actually on the same continent so I may need to remind everyone a little more of how cold it is in chapter 5 xD different biomes but still ...
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Re: Fury in the Wind chp 5 - Night Encampments
I actually cut out almost 600 words on the beginning after my 2nd draft so Im really happy to hear how well that part flowed. Your thoughts on the 2nd ...
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Re: Agents of Time: Chapter Eight; The plot fog
I get them being paper. But shouldn't they come kn some sort of satchel to keep them safe from prying eyes? also I meant leafed lol
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Re: Fury in the Wind Prologue - A Shadow in the Snow
There is definitely a scene where I could work it in - The Satchel but I kinda really want the entrance of the mysterious figure from the get go because ...
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