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@Deanie and @Deifyance are both fantastic reviewers! they have pointed out a whole lot of issues for me to fix!!! And @KnightTeen I didn't even know I had reviewied your ...

I agree with @niteowl. People generally don't always speak in complete sentences, so having all those red or green "error" lines gets annoying.

Yeah he is. Although there is about an even number of male to female characters.

As shocking as this may be I have read hardly any literature in my lifetime. But!! There is a series I read called Rangers Apprentice. It's medieval fantasy. But the ...

Just wanted to let you all know that I have decided on one idea. So thanks for the responses I am attempting to take all of your help into consideration. ...

OK, so I need some help. I have so many book and plot twist ideas in my mind right now and I really can't decide on one to go with. ...

This is a thought I had and I don't know if it would work (btw I like your idea as well Lotstthought) but when you get writers block write ABOUT ...

If I were the woman and I would look up the nearest shelter for abuse and hightail it there on foot. I don't know a whole lot about the rest ...

She cried, but he never heard.

At first I was going to say no, due to the fact that I could see her "parents" being faked and her real ones dead. But when you said the ...

I agree that both could go very well meshed together. If you feel that you could write one that would keep you interested in it as a writer, go for ...

Thank you and thank you. I do plan on writing from another person's perspective who knows more, and a major reveal will happen sometime in the book. I just didn't ...

I usually don't have anything. It tends to distract me a lot. If I do its just a cup of water. Cold water.

So, I am working on the skeleton of new story idea, and it involves controlling people in their subconscious mind through their nerves. Basically they rig the person so that ...

I have to agree on a lot of these things, but some of them I think are totally wrong. Description is very necessary. The characters need to see what you ...