Meshalidar

Accelerate ac·cel·er·ate 1. go faster to move increasingly quickly, or cause something to move faster 2. progress faster to happen or develop faster, or cause something to happen or develop ...

Llamas.

To finish... moonlight shone at her , Jok’s eyes met Replace this comma with either a semicolon or a period. towards her hair , he tugged Replace this comma with ...

To continue... She tried to break free of his gaze but he held it firmly , Separate ‘gaze’ and ‘but’ with a comma. Replace the comma with a period to ...

Lovely piece of work here. I enjoyed it. Took me a while to edit it, though. I'm not sure I got all of them... Nice job, nonetheless. E D I ...

Pathetic.

Very nicely done... A good read. On with the editting of grammatical errors. Chapter One Stren’s M other and F ather and especially his brothers, Eric and Sean. Unnecessary capitalization. ...

Very well done. I like this very much. Its abstract, and that is what makes it interesting and one of a kind. You might want to clear it up because ...

Flail.

Core.

Just kidding. Lass.

Ssss.

Putrefy.

Nicely done. Simple enough, except at the same time very powerful. The depth of it surpasses me, but I enjoyed it. Nice work. A keeper.

Lucid.