Meshalidar

Cures

Master.

Prompt.

Atomic Bomb...

Bunt

Learning...

Quite pathetic... But after all, you were drunk. Well... After all I said, where oranges talk to each other and they have created the world and your... name... Where do ...

Antimatter...

First, you might consider using pronouns a little more frequently. It becomes slightly repetitious saying ‘Lirin’ in two sentences coming right after one another there is no one else except ...

Thank you all very kindly for your comments... I really appriciate them and they have all been taken into account. All have been used in modifying it, so, again thank ...

This is absolutely magnificent... Catching the attention of the reader right away is a skill that is very nice to have. You, apparently, have mastered that skill. Very nice poem. ...

Nicely done, indeed. Flows nicely. The feeling is so complex but at the same time rather simple. Depth of it cannot be reached by such an infadel such as me... ...

This, I enjoyed... Though faith here took all of my thoughts. Nice job you two. This duet was a smart choice for it came out very nicely. And I'd like ...

Very nice story. I enjoyed it greatly. But unfortunately, I cannot match ZZAP's skill of Lordship over Editing. I will try though... ' Suddenly, the great gold dove for a ...

A ll the men stepped forward, coming to surround Mael. He had not expected this, but hoped for it to be an acceptance to him proposal. “Well. . . 'pparently ...