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Good work!!!! the last passage was the best one, you've explained everything very well, of course there are some mistakes but it doesn't matter!!!!!

Thanks alot your remarks were really helpfull :) thank you for review :)

This one is obviously better!!! Oh my God I'm sorry too, I really didn't think about all those things that others have written and I'm sure that you didn't think ...

Thanks lele253isme for your good words, when I wrote it I thought about a song too!!! If you think so too, then I'll really think about it!!! The inspiration was ...

finally I do change a word, sorry for lying ShadowKnight155 :)

Thank you ShadowKnight155 for your really positive opinion, you know I haven't changed my poem, and I don't think that I'll do it, cause when I wrote it I was ...

Thank you for your really helpful comment, I just want to say that by "yourself" I mean that he's a bit selfish, please tell me whenever you see something is ...