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Good work!!!! the last passage was the best one, you've explained everything very well, of course there are some mistakes but it doesn't matter!!!!!

Great job!!! :)

Thanks alot your remarks were really helpfull :) thank you for review :)

Ok you know I've a lot to say, but I'm short of time, so I'll say just a few things! 1. what you tried to say in this topic was ...

This one is obviously better!!! Oh my God I'm sorry too, I really didn't think about all those things that others have written and I'm sure that you didn't think ...

Thanks lele253isme for your good words, when I wrote it I thought about a song too!!! If you think so too, then I'll really think about it!!! The inspiration was ...

It's so touching!!! Great work!!! It really makes me imagine what they feel... I like your poem so much, would you mind if I share it in FB??? If you ...

finally I do change a word, sorry for lying ShadowKnight155 :)

Thank you ShadowKnight155 for your really positive opinion, you know I haven't changed my poem, and I don't think that I'll do it, cause when I wrote it I was ...

Hi Heather that was a good poem, it feels like throughout the poem your emotions overweight your reason, and it's wonderful and so impressive, it seems that you really know ...

Thank you for your really helpful comment, I just want to say that by "yourself" I mean that he's a bit selfish, please tell me whenever you see something is ...

Sometimes it seems to me That I'm not going to be Someone like you or Someone like me Because, you know, I've lost myself Somewhere between you and yourself. It ...