Merry_Haven

* salsashanno ~ Hey, thanks for reading this piece. It means a lot! Hehe. Yes, drugs are bad. * Stella Thomas ~ Wow. Thank you so much for all that ...

* Hannah & LoveableLittleSock ~ Thank you for checking this chapter out. But, I have not gotten any time to revise this. I know this piece needs help, and I ...

*Hannah~ Hey, thanks for the pointers you gave. I know that this piece needs some working on. But, when I get the time I will revise and edit. Thanks again! ...

* Aubree ~ Wow. Your pointers are really going to help. And I thank you for that. And you definitely helped. Thanks again! *Merry

* Angel of Death ~ I'm glad there wasn't a lot of mistakes and I did have trouble with the length. So I'll try to lengthen it. And thanks for ...

* salsashanno ~ Wow. I guess I'm improving little by little. Thank you for the pointers! I will soon revise. * ballerina13 ~ Thanks for saying it's unique. That means ...

* Bittersweet ~ Thank you so much for critiquing this. I will use your pointers when I come back from shopping. Oh, and I know that this prologue is really ...

* Angel of Death ~ All is fixed. Thank you for taking your time to read this prologue. It means a lot. Thanks again! *Merry

*Night Mistress~ Here are some comments and thoughts with this revision of yours! * The very beginning ~ Wow. Night Mistress, this was an amazing rewrite. I just love the ...

* lhighton ~ Hello, to you too! Actually I'm changing Sophia's Suitors to this one completely around. Only minor things will be the same. I just wanted something new. Wow, ...

* Hannah ~ Thank you for pointing out the grammar mistakes. I have just revised this. And yes, I do have a problem with over-expressive use of commas. Even my ...

*Night Mistress~ Thank you. Thank you. Thank you! For the review! It means a lot. Yeah, I spent over an hour writing very detaily. With the name, I wanted to ...

* 200397 & Angel of Death ~ Thank you. Thank you. Thank you!! I really appreciate the criticism you gave me. When. I have time I will revise this chapter. ...

* mikedb1492 ~ No, you didn't discourage me. I just need to think more of what I'm writing. Thanks, anyway. * Orchestrate ~ Thanks for all you said. Would you ...

* Night Mistress ~ Wow. Thanks for saying this is interesting. That means a lot. I will use what you pointed out and also use SeraphTree's pointers. Pm ~ that's ...