Merry_Haven

This is an experimental piece that I decieded to start. I'm not sure if I should continue or not so honest opinions are needed. Happy Reading! **Edited as of Oct. ...

Jas- She had dyed her hair so many times, I don’t even think she remembers her natural color. Ha! Sounds like me. I've constantly died my hair since 5th grade. ...

Ashley- So I read the prologue and this chapter and man, was I amazed. :lol: Don't we all have friends like Allison. The one who thinks the upperclassmen are hot. ...

Hey, everyone. i hope you enjoy the long await chapter six. I will have another poll here soon to help me determine the name of the baby, who will be ...

Jas- Wow. It's over? Like finally over? That's sad. :( I somehow wish there was more. So like Genna's changed and all {well I could tell she was by the ...

Jas- The choice of choosing between two men. How hard. Anyway, I do agree with Ashley, on the rush-e-ness of this chapter. Add more emotions of Genna. Man, I'm totally ...

day tripper- So I started reading this and from the first paragraph {of chapter 1} I was totally hooked! I seriously can't get enough of this story. It's so hilarious! ...

I'm not sure if this is done. I might add on later.... That's totally fine. :wink: Chapter Twenty-Four I Never Said That YEAH!!! Here I come... I stepped across the ...

Chapter Twenty-Two Bad or Good? Yeah!!! I am so ready for this. :D Here I come... I woke to the sound of monsters killing each other with machine guns. The ...

Krisy- First off, I love the title. So cute and true. Now, for my comments...God! I hate her mother. Becca is so right. Her mom is such a hag. Is ...

Jasmine- Chapter Seventeen Yeah!! I am so ready for this. :D My mind was fast enough to recognize the voice. “Ms. Avery?” Avery? Why's she here? Her blonde hair was ...

Okay, it's a little short and packed with spelling and grammar mistakes. Nit-pick away my friends. =) Of Course. :wink: But I'm glad for chapter sixteen. YEAH!!! I was waiting ...

CJeanene13- Okay. First off, remember to space out the paragraphs. Chunking the paragraphs, will make the reader not want to read it. Spread them out in separate paragraphs. Let them ...

Ashley- First off, the beginning of this chapter seriously made me laugh. :lol: I don't know why, actually. I guess it's the way you wrote it. :wink: Anyway, the dialogue ...

Lucy- Taking a quick sip of her latte she picked up on her walk in to work, Should be into. That's the only mistake I found. Other than that, I ...