Merry_Haven

Angel- I decided I didn't want to quote on this chapter. Reasons are unknown. Well, I just don't know why. Okay, Maxine being nice is kind of scary. But I ...

Part 4: Over Tea and Music You know, I'm liking these chapter titles. It gives a sense on what's going to happen. From her endless page turning, she could conclude ...

Part 3: Jealousy and Roses I'm back and ready!! Here I come... As Elizabeth nodded, Emily ran to give Maxine a kiss on the forehead, then walked out of the ...

Daniel, his eldest son, was a very quiet soul. When there were family gatherings, no one could recall whether he was a man or a ghost. His manner was dead. ...

Elizabeth picked up the hem of her skirt and ran back towards home, hoping she'd make it. Her long, dark hair floated in the wind, blanketing the sky with black. ...

Chapter Three Hey, Krisy! I'm so sorry it took so long to review this chapter. My bad. Well, here I go with my comments... Pain wasn’t something I had asked ...

lucyy- I have a feeling when I read this chapter that Cerise is a little girl and not a grown woman. It's just a thought that came upon my mind. ...

Sarah- I love it. It's just simple as that. I'm gonna cry. No!!! Don't cry, Merry! Haha. -- Totally off topic. :roll: Okay, now for my thoughts. Wow, Broken is ...

Ashley- First off...Happy thanksgiving!! Now to the point... I can't remember, but is Tim from the prologue? Wow, I'm liking Tim's velvety voice. Sounds dreamy and yet, sexy too. Man, ...

Ashley- Whoa, this is a very intriguing piece of work you have. You will definitely have to keep me updated when you post more. Hopefully soon. :wink: Anyway, now to ...

I watched on as my younger sister stolen the one constant thing in my life. Okay, Bri. This is kind of a dry beginning to a preface. I feel like ...

Sarah- Wow. This was a very intense chapter. It kept me at the edge of my seat and eyes locked at the monitor. It was that good. I didn't find ...

Feedback, please? :wink: I really struggled with this chapter so tell me if it's absolutely horrendous and I'll scrap it. Sure, Sarah. There is also a small round wooden table ...

lucyy- While reading this chapter, I was amazed how well you write. I didn't find any grammar mistakes that caught my eye. The way you described the emotions from Rosaline ...

Jas- Man, not knowing her name is seriously killing me! :x Anyway, is the MC going to have any happiness in her life? Instead of the depressing, one-parent family, no ...