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Demeter- So I'm reading this and I feel like it's not getting anywhere. Where's the plot? (I don't want to sound mean) I just feel like something's missing. And Lizzie ...

Demeter- Okay. Why did she just rush out of the room? I guess I'll have to read on. I do agree with the others about this chapter. I liked it, ...

Demeter- I had the exact same expression as Satin or Lizzie about her cousin's name. Cinnamon? Okay, never really heard that one before. The thoughts on Lizzie are kind of ...

Demeter- I'm liking this. I also like how you switch from Satin's POV to her cousin's. Gives us more insight. Man, I should totally watch a Little Princess again. Thanks, ...

"No." I tell Mom that right away. I don't want HER to come here and mess up my summer that was supposed to be the best one ever. I don't, ...

Ok, there's probably a load of mistakes, I'm just looking for some opinions. Thanks :) Hey, Kristen! Because you gave some comments on my story I shall give you some, ...

Some say it's Gossip Girl in the Victorian Era. But the choice is up to you if you want to pick it up, again. Just think of gossip, drama, handsome ...

Yes, I know, I have neglected this story and I'm sorry. I am returning to this so hopefully it wasn't too long of a wait that you all lost interest ...

day tripper- *squeals with joy* Man, I am like loving this story. :D The epilogue was a perfect touch. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ I can seriously see Welcome to ...

day tripper- Wow. *cries* Is it really over? I loved it! I loved everything about it. You are an amazing writer! You seriously have to get this published! Sorry, if ...

Angel- Whoa. Edward's mood changing is kind of scary. A bit. Is Will courting Maxine? I mean, like secretly? Awww. Daniel and Maria will make a adorable couple. I hope ...

Angel- Well. Well. Well. I see that Andrew has a different streak to him. Very interesting. Uh, I see you have a lot of characters in this chapter. But that ...

Angel- What?! Is Edward and Andrew going to fight? Oh, now I remember who Andrew is. And he's the one who's painting Lizzie. Got it. Uh, okay. Maxine is totally ...

Angel- Oh. Oh. Oh. Oh! *giggles with happiness* I am seriously loving this story. :D I'm like loving Edward. This chapter was really intense. And I loved every moment of ...

Part 6: An equal balance of two worlds. Yes, I'm back with my quotes!! Here I go... The carriage was only used on special occasions. Which meant, Patch, the Greenly ...