Merry_Haven

Ashley, the first thing I thought was the Beatles as I read this. Very cute touch to the story. Through out reading this chapter, I felt like Sophia was becoming ...

Like I said before, "whoa, that was really good." And I really do mean it. "Blood mate" and "Uniter", stands perfectly where it is. You don't need to change it ...

Whoa, did that just happen? Did Sophia just do that? What's going on with her? Ashley, I have so many questions. When I started to read chapter 4, I noticed ...

Well, I hope Sophia can handle school without having the gang there. I thought I liked Nora but now my mind has changed. I still can't decided if I like ...

Whoa, that just gave me shivers down my spine when I read the last part. Ashley, you have knack for writing spectacular {weird word} vampire stories. When Sophia remembered her ...

I'm breathless. Absolutly breathless. It was that good Ashleylee. I just read a few of your reviews and I'm so sorry what Veracelle mentioned to you. That guy/girl has no ...

Hey ashleylee it's me, Merry. I've read your prologue and it's time to review! Just like Night Mistress said I don't think I could write like that even if i ...

I found this chapter weird to understand because it went back and forth between Lilly, the boy, and both of them. But it was good and learning what each character ...

I'm back and ready to ask questions and review. ^_^ The council? What's the council for this story? Or do I have to read more to find out? A mate? ...

Hi it's Merry again. I read ch.2 and it was like "Whoa...I had a really good feeling" reading this. Okay when she talked about her sisters, is Adelicia one of ...

Whoa there. That was...strangely good. I liked it and somehow it made me feel like I was actually there at the party and house. When I read this I noticed ...

lucyy, Since I'm new at the whole reviewing thing I'll try my best at doing it. First of all the character description was a whole lot better than mine! :) ...

Oh my god! I feel like crying! This preface gave me an idea what would happen next. I would like to know what she did wrong for her true love ...

Night Mistress- First of all it was a great prolouge that made me want more. Now who's speaking and who's eyes are we seeing it through? What emotions are shown ...