Merlin34

When I try to post in the Read/Write forums, it doesn't let me. I type out a post and hit "Submit", but it doesn't go through. If I'm doing it ...

I like that third idea.

I liked this. It vas (joke intended) very interesting. Dream sequences are cliche, but yours works well. One thing you could try is to make the dream more surreal. It ...

The Lightning Thief The Subtle Knife Catching Fire

Jormundr? You mean Jormungand, the Midgard Serpent? And I'm confused. DO you need more villains? Just google "greek monsters" or "norse monsters". Here's a list of Greek ones. That's a ...

I could easily ace a test about either mythology, but I can't help you. You need to give us more information. What do you need help with? Do you have ...

I've gotten articles published in a few papers.

This was interesting. It's nice to see a vampire story that actually involves KILLING THEM, and not falling for them. Now, onto the meat of the review. The grammar didn't ...

The grammar on this piece suffers a bit, but I know you normally do a good job with it, so I won't go too crazy. Sorry if my review gets ...

I won't beat a dead horse here and talk about the grammar. Instead, I'll look at two other issues: dialogue and character. So far, I haven't really learned much about ...

You could say that it's for anyone who's young compared to a mature bristlecone pine. Considering those things are thousands of years old, that means everyone. :D

You are as a good a writer as you are a review. And as you can pick out every flaw in a person's work (which is why I like you), ...

Karsten has over 9000 awesome points.

This was hilarious! So completely random and awesome! I especially liked the "mochatov cocktail" and "STD ray". Where do you come up with this stuff? It's crazy. And epic. But ...

Arf!