Merlin34

Sounds all right. Just make sure you give him substantial reasons for wanting to off himself, and not just a bunch of cliche angst.

Unless you intend to do writing full-time, you've probably got some sort of career idea (or if you're older, career). So what are you thinking of doing when you're older? ...

Maybe there could be a Karma-like system where you can give someone a point if they do a really good review.

I think I'll have another article up by today. This one about my thoughts from 100 feet up a white pine.

I've got an essay about a fisher that I could submit, but I want to wait until I have the final draft.

It wouldn't let me submit anything until I uploaded an image to go with it.

Can they be about writing?

Fred was created by a female scientist in a very male-dominated society. Females were expected to wear dresses all the time, and F.R.E.D. was always puzzled since he recognized his ...

Another question. How does one avoid the "token" minority in a story?

I know that some people get mad when there aren't members of minorities (black, GLBT, etc.) in stories. I personally think that having them and stereotyping them to death or ...

I'm all for this. I work at a real newspaper too. :D

Merenor: Forgo the guns and blast everyone to death with my magickz.

I can feel my body sucking the water away from the shore, and I know it won't be long before I hit land. Through the shifting sea, I see several ...

Vivien A small boy with short brown hair and gray eyes, constantly nervous about things no one else notices.

You did a good job for the most part. The main issues were with the prose. It seemed choppy in places. Here's an example. It increases. With it increases my ...