Merlin34

It tells a good story, but like sugarxsnow said, it isn't that emotionally or physically tragic, or gripping. Also, it doesn't seem to have much "flow" to it. That or ...

Positive feedback only. Nah, just kidding, constructive criticism would be nice. I don't want EVERYONE just going "omg ur story is da best" or variations on that central theme. Even ...

I like it. I have a soft spot for any mythology, but I have never read any Aztec mythology. I like how you used a lot of words and phrases ...

Well, I didn't know there was a section for that stuff! Why do you have to keep it hidden from everyone?!?! I'm leaving!

Here are Chapters 2-3! Chapter 2 Having Fun After fooling Alexa, he popped down from the tree. Then he realized, “If I did that, how much more fun can I ...

I can't see them.

It was a Wii vs PS3 article. The bunnies were based on erasers I would always order from Oriental Trading.

Do you like to play video games? I play Animal Crossing and Legend of Zelda Ocarina of Time! And Wii Sports!

I hate having to kill off characters but it is neccesary in my plot line to kill three or four off. I may kill off some of my characters too. ...

Me too!

A tall young woman, probably from North Africa, with straight black hair. Nick.

So far, a little dull (no offense), but it has the potential to be a great book! Great job!

Oops, sorry! Well, Minnesota IS big... The book was called "Forest Bunnies" and it was about multi-colored bunnies with a monster truck. I once got an article published!

I would say yes, but I would want to oversee the production so they don't make it too far derived from the book!

Hello! This is Chapter 1 of my story, The Nick of Time! Enjoy! Or else... :twisted: :P Or else I won't post anymore! Prologue Welcome. Friends, Romans, dinosaurs, lend me ...