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Yeah, they're great. Although there are a couple things which I think she should have done rants on. Mainly these 3. 1. Prophecies 2. Creating Your Own Creatures 3. Bitterness ...

I've done part of it. I'm not sure if you're allowed to do your advanced crits in parts... but fi you aren't, then it really should be put in the ...

Confused here. If someone has already done an advanced critique of a story (or if they said they would but didn't), can you do one too? Also, can you do ...

Big heroes in small packages. coughbasilcough

I had an idea that I wanted to work with, but it took me a few tries to get the story I have now, with Xavier starting out in our ...

What do you think is a good prologue for any sort of story, but especially fantasy? I put in a prologue for mine, which sort of explains a backstory, how ...

If it's an old man smoking a pipe in the evening or something, no. If it's an underage person smoking a cigarette, yes.

When I was 6 I wrote a story about a bunch of rabbits who owned a monster truck.

My muse got back from an extended vacation a few days ago and has been working full-throttle.

There is some bad language on the site, but it is an excellent resource, filled with tips on writing about certain things in fantasy.

Yeah, I've decided to make threads to house 3 chapters at a time. If you haven't read the previous chapters, you should. Chapter 4 Deadly Discovery The air was warm ...

"He had got a tent of his own, but most of the other men had to share theirs with someone else." Maybe mention there that he's a captain, because that ...

UR MEAN WAAH! :( XD Seriously, THANK YOU for the constructive criticism. I've done a lot of editing to the first chapter since I posted it. I think I'll edit ...

Well, thanks! I'm actually going over the story now and looking for things like grammatical errors, plot holes, and other stuff. But I never considered things like that. Thank you! ...

After traveling through time with Nick and Co, they were ambushed and killed by a kid and his dragon, who forced me to write about them. But then THEY were ...